Song for MS | Revised Chorus
Hey there, based on feedback that the chorus should contain BOTH the words 'Shine' and 'Smile', here's a revised chorus. Big thanks to my songwriting buddies Marsha Malamet and Liz Vidal (with whom I wrote Real Life) for helping me out with the revised lyrics and chorus.
As always, let me know your thoughts and/or comments.
I'll be uploading the song in its entirety (to this point) very shortly.
Thanks for your support,
Cheers, Marie